People no longer use newspaper and television because the internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology had its footstep in everyplace ranging from workplace to house. Individuals are likely to depend more on online world for entertainment rather than conventional methods. I partially accede to this statement and this essay will further discuss about it.
On one half, in past few decades people had started using internet to learn about news as well as other medias because it provides descriptions of the information with the help of both image presentation and notes. Therefore it not only plays role of newspaper but also act as television. For instance, applications such as google which act as search engine so on just one click will provide informative data. As a result it saves time and money. Moreover internet is very handy matter as it can be carried to everyplace.
On flip side, e-world being easy to resuscitate or time saving though it is difficult for older masses to operate, whereas it is convenient to go for either rag or television. Furthermore, traditional methods for entertainment or fetching update of world requires no internet access as well as smart gadgets. For example, press such as Time of India provides local and international news with image and data. In addition television also furnish audio video information which is straightforward to understand.
To summarize, humans uses internet for various purpose as it is handy and time saving but still is having few drawbacks likewise internet access, knowledge about it and so on. However, traditional methods does not have special requirements and hence older people finds them as a boon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17054263566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93866961393 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7118828565 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118014114592 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376647453426 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467394432871 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660564935327 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491039228035 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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