You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear Amit,

I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place.

I'm writing to say that I forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. It is very precious to me as it is gifted by my uncle.

It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostal address. But, make sure to cross check address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it.

Give my best wishes to everyone in the family.

See you soon!

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g fine. I just got home safe and sound. I would like to express how thankful I am...
^
Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rejuvenates'?
Suggestion: rejuvenates
...delightful experience and it definitely rejuvenate my mind. Since I really had a great ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd. Since I really had a great time, i forgot my wallet in your house. I thoug...
^
Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to spending'.
Suggestion: to spending
...f my time here. I am looking forward to spend more holidays with you and I hope you c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ill be your host next time around. I cant wait to see you again my friend. Bes...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 5.60731707317 945% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21739130435 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39652482418 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9447928359 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5625 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9375 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315779582518 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100583833866 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988306039561 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19104895159 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944026560642 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 13.2329268293 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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