Essay Topic : Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
The question of whether school or parents should teach children how to be good society members is widely debated. There are valid arguments on both sides of this controversial topic, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, some people feel that it might be wise for children to absorb societal codes of conduct at school, for the time they spend in a typical school day. School environment provides students with practical skills such as discipline, punctuality and patience which represent a good citizen. A further reason to be wary of this idea is teacher’s neutrality in judging them. While parents’ judgement is biased, for they adore their children, teachers can evaluate them from different perspective.
On the other hand, though, people opposed to the notion above point to the influence of parents over children. Children have a tendency to imitate their parents, which could be a positive effect as long as parents act as good role models. Secondly, it is advisable for parents to establish ground rules to developing proper social conventions and attitudes. Lastly, it is said that parents spend a substantial amount of time with their children and this can be one more way of teaching moralities of life. It is hard to become a better and valuable person in the future without morally accepted behavior, after all.
Overall, I tend to believe that child behavior is a delicate matter, which should carefully be developed by parents in the lead and the school playing its supportive role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, after all, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71282764466 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0294987817 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284318956931 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916550391251 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075925094634 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184974862946 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834512531425 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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