Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that children should be well-mannered. Some people that children should be educated in all manners in society by parents, however, other people state that children should learn this in school. Parents are the first teachers for every children.
On the one hand, children will obey the words of parents rather than the teachers. Parents should teach standard qualities such as honesty, respect, and kindness. These qualities should be educated from childhood by parents in order to demonstrate how pupils should behave in the community. For example, my dad taught my little brother at an early age how to be gentleman, and now my brother is really polite and intelligent. Evidently, parents play an essential role in the upbringing of the child.
On the other hand, one of the crucial parts of life is school period. School is the place where students explore something new and meet with new friends throughout 11 or 12 years. However, some students fall under the wrong influence and they do not react to any comments about their behaviour from parents. For instance, my ex-friend has been communicating with ill-mannered students since we went to separate schools. As a result, the community in the school tend to be different and social circle is affecting your behavior in the public.
To conclude, I tend to agree with former point of view because only parents can give the opportunity to raise a child the right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02479338843 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63171239223 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5585785097 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300766993162 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913418470286 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776981344722 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164873316909 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973514168827 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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