Hi Amit,
I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place. I like interior as well as location of your house. Really, it was pleasant stay.
However, as you know that none of our trip finish without having any problem. A problem free trip is not our cup of tea. I am writing to say that i forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. Please check the table at the corner. It is very precious to me as it is a gift from my uncle.
It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostel address. But, make sure to cross check address properly before writing it down, as some important documents are in it. Also, do not forget to pack it properly, as it is a raining session.
Please get back to me as soon as possible.
See you soon!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur cup of tea. I am writing to say that i forget my wallet at your home because o...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, i feel, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17944947177 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7875181774 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.0 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234689451104 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670057665693 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771977966022 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110289750831 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799717886485 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.03 8.71597938144 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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