Undoubtedly, the majority of people would be likely to be happy in their lives. While the different cognition of happiness from individuals make it hard to define, and there are some common factors we all shared play a vital role in achieving happiness.
With the different background of life and culture, happiness means something different to each person. And it is the difference increase the difficulty to define happiness, because everyone is unique and cannot be copied. Some people, for example, regard a high standard of living and high rank of social status as happiness, whereas for the others believe their family members live a healthy and happy life as their own happiness. For another aspect, the opinions from one individual person toward to happiness are even different in different age. It is common that many children think enough time to play computer games is the happiest thing, but with the growth of age, the definition of happiness might change more than once.
The different cognition people hold, the different approaches that people achieve happiness. While there are some similar factors contribute to happiness. Firstly, it is hard for people to be happy if they live in an unsafe place and lack of enough food. Our basic need of life should be met before we can begin an optimistic life. Secondly, the pleasance of the mental aspect is an indispensable component of happiness. The achievement which makes people happy, to some extent, is basing on spiritual rather than on material.
In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define due to its different to each individual. But as far as I am concerned, basic material and spiritual needs are important to achieve happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...proaches that people achieve happiness. While there are some similar factors contribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10320284698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72865334341 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6641529278 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22074678901 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075927110868 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471949436681 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157918653598 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590359825608 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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