There are some people making the general assertion that people these days are faced with countless choices. However, I completely disagree with this idea for two major reasons which will be discussed in detail.
To begin with, although there might be found an abundant supply of items to choose from, circumstances limit people’s freedom and flexibility. In other words, regardless of the availability of ample opportunities, it is not technically feasible for everyone to consider all the existing options when making a decision. This is amply illustrated by one’s income level and purchasing clothes; it is incontestable that someone from low income brackets cannot afford to buy designer clothes no matter how many different brands are offered in shops. Therefore, only the few privileged are likely to be overwhelmed by numerous possibilities to take into account.
Another rational justification is that nowadays a growing number of people tend to opt for quality goods which are outnumbered by similar but mediocre copies that markets are teeming with. Simply put, considering that modern consumers are likely to prefer authentic and high quality products, they automatically exclude other alternatives. For instance, some refuse to buy anything labeled “made in China” as they believe all Chinese productions fail to meet acceptable standards. More specifically, the prevalence of these items restricts buyers’ flexibility and omits many choices from their lists.
In conclusion, contrary to the popular belief, I believe that people are not provided with too many options to choose from. The most obvious argument justifying this assumption is that it may not be financially viable for all people to consider pricy and famous brands and yet many have a tendency to choose lasting and genuine products. These limiting factors have far-reaching effects on what consumers put in their shopping basket.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words 84
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d to buy designer clothes no matter how many different brands are offered in shops. Therefore,...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to last'.
Suggestion: to last
... and yet many have a tendency to choose lasting and genuine products. These limiting fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55743243243 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.983012456 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652027027027 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.466461817 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175359475252 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610922622109 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436610089519 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114158757127 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428978397795 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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