The argument whether success can be measured based on ones personal goal, is a contentious one. I believe true success can not be measured by evaluating goals one sets for oneself. Because one can set irrelevant goals which has nothing to do with success. Furthermore, there are collective goals which depends on lots of people, achieving a single person's goal will mean nothing in that case.
First, people set lots of goal which have nothing to do with success. For example, I personally set a goal of watching all episodes of Game of Thrones TV series in just one week. This goal will not help me achieving anything. I set these goal entirely for entertainment purpose. Again, sometimes we set wrong goals. For example, If someone sets a goal to lose 20 kg of weight in one week to become slimmer then the only thing he or she will lose is good health. Setting this kind of goal will not make one successful in life.
Furthermore, there are goals set by our society. For example, if students want to be successful academically then they must get good grades in school - a goal set by society. If some student set his own goal of getting only a overall B grade and think he or she is successful then that will be a foolish thing to assume. Also, society's goal can be collective. For example, a country's goal is to increase its GDP 50% in 10 years. Increasing only few government officials income would mean nothing in that case because the goal here have to be achieved collectively by all the people of a country.
On the other hand, some people argue achieveing personal goal brings peace of mind and make one truly successfu. But peace of mind does not always mean success. for example, one might feel peaceful after buying a decent shoe or dress which has nothing to do with success.
In conclusion, meaning of success vary person to person. But as a whole one has to achieve the goals society set for us to become truly successful. Fulfilling personal milestones does not make one successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: this goal; these goals
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Suggestion: goals'; goal's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65449438202 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57562987131 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6516718513 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0434782609 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4782608696 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27665939313 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107118277599 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752756171501 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180593234433 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075816587239 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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