Nowadays, varies high-tech machine facilitate the information explosion. Meanwhile, people start to wonder the accuracy of the information acquired from the media comparing to the news acquired in the past and concern about its misleading outcomes. In my opinion, the news today is more convincing and accurate and the information transparency prevent spreading of the incorrect information.
Obviously, different advanced technology has been innovated and applied to trace the accuracy of the news today. All information including image, words and sounds could be far analyzed to distinguish its origin. For example, before the publication, the newspaper need to complete the image analysis using a Jpegsnoop
software, which would tell the original photo layer of the image and further conclude if the image has been recomposed. The software could also be downloaded from the Internet if the reader would like to check the image by himself.
Besides, large amounts of information from different media protect the information transparency. The number of media far exceed the one in the past and these media would report an event from special views to depict the truth, which would never miss any details of the truth. For example, the death of the ZHANG Guorong, a famous star in HONG KONG, is a heart breaking news for many fans. However, due to the abundant reports of his emotional illness, his fans understand ZHANG is not refusing to fight with the life stress, but his illness torture him extremely and unluckily he made the decision at a very moment without a clear mind. His story still very encouraging for his fans to keep a clear mind and face all challenges in their life.
Last but not least, many famous publishers are well equipped than the past to ensure the quality of their publication. Various professional training, high-tech machine and transportation vehicles facilitate the reporter to collect their information. For example, my cousin is a well-trained emergency reporter after recruiting by CHANGJIANG publisher. When the Wechuan earthquake happening, my cousin and his 2 teammates, take the plane to the incident site immediately and collected the primary information about the injuries and death. Thanks to the their professional training and highly equipped portal shooting machine, the public could know more about the truth but not the rumors at the first time.
All in all, the information collected today are more accuracy and transparent than the past and the spreading of the rumors has been far more declined. All of the above make the public being the much prepared for any challenge in their life.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public. 83
- Sample TOEFL essay: After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer. 73
- Sample TOEFL essay: After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25176470588 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80536904911 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527058823529 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7060709513 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.473684211 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16960837258 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525913018183 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528300511111 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903570082009 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644913298171 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.