Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself.
Dear Mr. Kashif,
I am an undergraduate student of final year studying B.S Civil Engineering from NED University, Karachi. I have selected Transportation Engineering (Part-II) as an optional course which is best subjected to my interest.
I have always been keen to become a civil engineer whenever I thought I would go for my professional studies. I admire the aesthetics of the architectural ideas and want to fulfill the requirements needed to present it physically in front of our eyes. I also love to go for long journeys and travel in all modes of transportation and probably due to this hobby, I have developed my interest in Transportation Engineering. Studying this subject would guide me in all calculations related to geometric and pavement design. This would also help me in achieving good scores in my final year exams as my dissertation is also related to the same course.
I hope I would be able to continue my passion along with studies and would not give you chance to complain for my decision.
Regards
Huma Mohiuddin
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-22 | Nguyen 270483 | 56 | view |
| 2019-04-22 | Nguyen 270483 | 11 | view |
| 2019-04-22 | Nguyen 270483 | 11 | view |
| 2018-08-05 | Huma Mohiuddin | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...aduate student of final year studying B.S Civil Engineering from NED University, ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I would go for my professional studies. I admire the aesthetics of the architectu...
^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent it physically in front of our eyes. I also love to go for long journeys and t...
^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y decision. Regards Huma Mohiuddin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01142857143 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13661718208 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9457393257 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00671540626073 0.216113520407 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0032262539371 0.0766984524023 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.009125224147 0.0603063233224 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0064401017325 0.12726935374 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00910767921317 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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