You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won, describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match
Dear Sidra,
I am very sorry to hear about your injury occurred in an accident that took place last Wednesday due to which you have to be admitted in hospital. We missed you in the football match played at the weekend.
I am very excited to share with you that our team won the match in spite of the heavy rain that day. The floor was very slippery and it became very difficult for us to win the game. And of course, you were also missing as a major team player. There was a huge challenge ahead of us. But fortunately, we were able to target and achieve our goals and eventually, we won. We felt very sorry for the opposing team as they practiced and played really hard to win.
I would suggest you to get rest as prescribed by the doctor and have a come back again with a blast. Hope to see you well soon.
Regards
Huma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, of course, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13010416412 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0395010807 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267816433267 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931443099413 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792250263196 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186444977608 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668804705084 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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