A nation should require all it's students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Education in the modern world is a weapon given to each child from his/her parents. As often seen education has the power to change the course of a person's life and hence is given utmost priority in bringing up a child. But in recent few years many societies believe education to be the only gateway to the success of an individual. Barring the fact that each individual is a separate entity many people see education as the sole thruster in an individual's life.
This thought provokes the need of providing similar educational syllabus to each student without considering the fact that each possess different abilities and has unique strengths. The whole process of this type of education system leads to a herd's mentality where neglecting own's strengths students often follow the trends an choose an inappropriate career.
The idea of same curriculum for the whole nation seems to be obtuse as each state of a nation has different strengths. Some states produce word class athletes while some are home to talented artists. Thus implementing the idea of same curriculum for whole nation somehow forces young budding talents to leave their hobbies and focus more on studies. As in case of India each state has its own education board where the academic skills of a student are judged on their caliber.
Another loophole that is quite evident in this sort of education plan is that learning ability and interests of each student are different according to their brain development. Some students learn early while some are some are slow learners. What this education system does is ,leaves a student with slow learning ability to resort with a mediocre life. As for example Thomas Edison was himself a slow learner but turn out to be modern great when it comes to modern scientists.
When the interests of a student are not in sync with what he is taught it often leads to despair regarding studies. Where a young mind unable to rectify reason for his lost interest despises the source of it.
A fitting solution for this problem is creation of levels in an education system where till an elementary level the curriculum is same for all the students. When teachers realize that a student is mature enough he should be allowed to choose his subjects. Another important thing is to include some necessary subjects such as mathematics which have application in daily life, but to a level where it is useful and doesn't add up as burden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ee education as the sole thruster in an individuals life. This thought provokes the need...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'herds'' or 'herd's'?
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...heir hobbies and focus more on studies. As in case of India each state has its own...
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..., but to a level where it is useful and doesnt add up as burden.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, while, as for, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87019230769 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54678396078 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9794557829 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120675076557 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039157782129 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572704610207 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607028691748 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574920047386 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.