It is generally discussed among the public that extreme sports such as skydiving and rock-climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where the prevention of dangerous sports is a heated topic and often discussed. It is universally believed that players are forbidden from extreme sports such as skydiving and rock-climbing is an optimal approach to avoid serious accidents. This essay shall explain my argument against the ineffectiveness of this solution and suggest the feasibility of superior alternatives to improve sports safety.
The aforementioned method could be futile due to the fact that the problem of sports accidents does not stem from adventurous physical recreation. In fact, it does not cause unnecessary suffering if players pay attention to audit the personal protective equipment and follow the instructions of the sport correctly because each adventure sport has its own rules. In addition, participating in daily activities such as driving cars without obeying the law can also occur an unfortunate accident. For example, a rock-climber, who got the advice and expert opinion from the professionals before attempting it himself, will know how to climb in jagged limestone cliffs and how to deal with the problem when he falls down into deep water.
In other hands, participating in adventure games is also a way for them to discover hidden parts of themselves. They do things they never thought of before, which helped them to overcome their limitations and have lasting memorize experiences in their life. For instance, the experience in deep water with pressure, the wave up and down, sharks swim around you is not in the same with the feeling when you watch the National Geographic channel.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that extreme sports, which is not cause dangers, shouldn’t be banned. Morover, it is an exhilarating sport that we must try once in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98639722744 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643097643098 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6624520867 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195190884708 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060336432217 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461451851543 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107189502807 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402510882128 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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