As far as the sources are concerned, both the passage and the lecture discuss that specially teenagers are reading less nowadays such as literature,novels, plays, and poems. While the reading passage mainly focuses missing out significant benefits, the professor points out why reading literature declines recently.
The reading passage says that decrasing in book reading let people to decline imaginations, using language skills. The listening passage, however, says that the literature has high quality and it can help to improve imaginations.
İn contrast to speaker's point of view, the author points out that people are reading shallow poorly written and they tend to watch TV or read unnessary entertainment which makes lower the level of cultere. The speaker, goes on to say, however, that culture is changed and people are spending their time with music and movies than literature.
Finally unlike the listening passage the reading passage says that thanks to today's reader, the wrting scale down whereas there are a lot of gifted writers today. The speaker, however, disagrees with this point of view. The professor feels that decline reading literature is sometimes autor's fault hence it is hard to figure out what you read
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , novels
...reading less nowadays such as literature,novels, plays, and poems. While the reading pa...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...with music and movies than literature. Finally unlike the listening passage the readin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33673469388 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65153017047 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1869089919 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383177490667 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159727305235 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802718145097 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242920966764 0.162205337803 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336736470236 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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