A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
tell your friend you understand the problem
explain what happened to you in the past
suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Dear Smith,
I got your letter yesterday and it was shocking to know that you are undergoing such a stressful condition at your workplace these days. As a senior accountant in a law firm, I can fully empathize with your state of mind and can understand how equally demanding your role could be in an insurance company.
When two of my consultants quit the organization a few months ago, I was overloaded with a huge pile of backlog. You see, I was forced to stay back and had to complete the client cases on weekend too. I can't explain how dreadfully I passed those two months without a break. Then, some of my colleague friends advised me better ways to cope with the work. Perhaps, you could try them and find them helpful.
As soon as we hired new staff, I took a long vacation with my family. The unhealthy work-life balance had led to weak performance and mood swings. So, I saw a therapist who taught me healthy coping skills. Also, he helped me identify unhealthy thoughts and ways to get rid of them by taking yoga and meditation sessions which kind of rejuvenated my whole mind. Now I feel completed relaxed and refreshed.
I'd be glad to share the contact details of the counselling service. Hope you come out of this anxiety soon.
yours lovingly
Pradeep Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...terday and it was shocking to know that youre undergoing such a stressful condition a...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lete the client cases on weekend too. I cant explain how dreadfully I passed those t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...eel completed relaxed and refreshed. Id be glad to share the contact details of...
^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... completed relaxed and refreshed. Id be glad to share the contact details of th...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... you come out of this anxiety soon. yours lovingly Pradeep Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, as for, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64912280702 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58925021619 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697368421053 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6791981156 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202400065342 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544359317188 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056438726334 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975248347873 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597780643833 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.