some people think that rich countries should support poorer countries in terms of aid for health and aducation. To what extend do you agree ?
The need of both education and health care are essential for lives' preservation. As a matter of fact, human being, therefore can not put aside the premiere demand of both key problems in sustaining humans' life. At the same time, those needs are not affordable for the majority of people in developing countries. Hence, I personally believe that well-off countries have to take action to aid countries which are less developed in order to maintain the worlds' balance and harmony.
Education is factually considered as a main feature in in advancing people's life. Looking more deeper to this issue, it is widely known that many attempts to reach educational excellency have been worked by richer countries around the world. In addition to such phenomenon, it is believed that Education and Health care have become first concern of the developed nations. Japan and United State of America for instance are acknowledged as two powerful countries in term of preserving educational continuity in several poorer countries such as Myanmar and Bangladesh, henceforth their struggle to accomplish the idea of social balance has to be supported by another country around the world. It also recognized widely that Japan chooses Myanmar for its people lack in term of education and technology. USA on the other hand opens its door for student overseas to gain educational improvement through full bright scholarships and continuing their study in several respectable american universities.
Other than education, human being can not put aside the health care as their premiere need. Indeed, it is one of the key reasons of living in excellency, without the presence of its affordability access human being may once again stuck in the dark age where healing people barely impossible. On this case, USA and Japan are taking prominent role play in delivering free health care treatments for Ebola victims along African coast, that effort has become an example for the G20, especially for the European countries to get involved in such volunteering work in recent decades. An effort in aiding the Ebola victim along African coast are the evidence on how developed countries should act toward others.
In conclusion, helping others is tend to be considered as an act of kindness as its essential for the sake of human being's life balance. Hence, I personally believe that the preservation of aiding poorer countries is not merely the responsibility of the United Nations but also the richer countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...less developed in order to maintain the worlds balance and harmony. Education is f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... factually considered as a main feature in in advancing peoples life. Looking more de...
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Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...e in in advancing peoples life. Looking more deeper to this issue, it is widely known that ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...d by richer countries around the world. in addition to such phenomenon, it is beli...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s. In conclusion, helping others is tend to be considered as an act of kindness ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... as its essential for the sake of human beings life balance. Hence, I personally belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18610421836 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79007073417 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.176344669 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23346812257 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758908572225 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562578423106 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142396480794 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242032714441 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.