The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in thrèe different countries in the U.S state of oregon.
The Multi line graph illustrates the population change in thrèe countries namely Colombia, Yamhill and Washington in the U.S state of oregon from 1940 to 2000.The data calibrated in thousands.
Have a look on the year of 1940, the population of both countries Colombia and Yamhill were almost same about 30 thousands in this year however, with the difference of two folds, population changed could be noticed in former while, later was just above a less than third thousands till 1970.There was a significant rise showed both countries the first one reached on 90 thousands on the other hand, the second place was accumulated three quarters in 2000.
By having a glance on the another country, the growth rate of Washington which started from 75 thousands in initial year whereas, with in the duration of 30 years it inclined gradually. Surprisingly, the population was suddenly shootuped and touched the peak point about 240 thousands in last year.
Overall, most of the changes could be observed the population of Washington as compare to the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07471264368 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74041526219 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.390653865 43.030603864 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.6 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 5.23603664747 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266119130335 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138505996725 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135123318902 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168567615808 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134541901254 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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