The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in Euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level.
The bar graphs illustrate the level of graduates and under graduates both male and female who earn money in seven days in different age groups. The data calibrated in euros.
Having a look on the under graduates men , who earn only 100 euros in 16-19 the second age groups about 20 -24 earning doubled rather than former. Difference of 100 euros could be accumulated in 25 -49 as well as last 50 -59 earn 400 euros .Moreover, just above a 200 euros earn by the graduates men in 20 - 24 whereas, keeps on inclining 25 -49.Interestingly , 50-59 age groups which earn money near around 700 euros.
By having a glance on, 16 -19 females who receiving a salary of 100 euros which belong to a under graduates categories however, the salary rising with approximately 150 euros from 20 to till 59.Furthermore, graduates women earnings 250 euros in The tabular chart illustrates the percentage of teenagers who attended the various schools such as specialist schools and grammar schools from 2000 to 2009.
Having a look on the voluntary controlled schools, the attendance of the children was just above a half percent in 2000 however in the middle of the year it followed declining trend about 38% whereas it was a 18% lesser than the former year in 2009.Moreover, 24% children attended the classes in grammar school but, in the further years like in 2005 , 2009 it inclined with 19% and 12% respectively.
By having a glance on, the pupils of the community schools in initially year attended only 12% classes and in 2005 it was upsurging with 20%.Surprisingly the percentage of Pupils was near about doubled in previous year as compare to the 2005.In case of the total proportions of the specialist schools similar to the community schools in 2000.In the following years it dropped to with 1% with the comparison of 2000.
Overall, the percentage of the pupils in voluntary controlled schools were more popular but it allocated least trend in specialist schools.20-24 as well as others leveld off 300 euros.
Overall, both graduates men and women earn more money as compare to the under graduates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 33.7804878049 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 965.302439024 180% => OK
No of words: 356.0 196.424390244 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87921348315 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82910223294 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.844517886 43.030603864 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.0 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5555555556 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177061668789 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871251696958 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843523649318 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879931746921 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089311612834 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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