Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
In your letter:
• when and where you hired it
• describe how the accident happened
• what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir / Ma’am,
My name is Huma and I have hired a car Suzuki Hyundai Model 2010 from your company in Karachi couple of days ago. I am writing to inform you that a small accident has been occurred yesterday, August 02, 2018, which has not caused huge damage to the car.
The accident so happened as I was driving with an average speed through the road in Saddar, I came across a family who were waiting for a public transport. A child with them who would be probably less than 5 years old, was playing with a ball. With the wink of an eye, the ball fell towards the lane in which I was driving and the child rushed towards it. I went panic and moved the staring of the car right swiftly in order not to hit the child, but to my amazement, the car hit a pole.
The child’s parents were very thankful for the prompt response and I made sure the child is all well but I apologize for damaging the body of the car over the right front wheel. The parents are willing to cover up the expenses for the loss if the car is not insured.
I would request you to replace me the damaged car with a new one within few days. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Huma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...me across a family who were waiting for a public transport. A child with them who would be probabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27631578947 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17191737227 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6461977936 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213895804507 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813560533879 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635051713226 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108995938261 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10585265058 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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