College and university education should be free for all students, fully financed by the government
The writer of the issue states that the tuition of both university and college should be free for all students. I cannot agree with this statement as it is; I think education should be free for some people but not for some other people.
In my opinion the both university and college education should be free for poor people for two main reasons. The first reason is that the poor people have not enough money to pay the government for their education; hence, they are not able to develop their skills to attain to the highest level of position in the society, therefore they remain poor, and it is not fair. And the second reason is that the society won't be able to develop in the knowledge because as I stated in the first reason they are not afford to pay tuition and also there are some intelligent students among them whom if they are supported by the government they could cause the progress of the society in economic, military, health, science and also education. And also that progresses will bring the society more money than the money had paid for their educations.
I agree with the education should not be free for rich students for three main reasons. The first reason is that if they have to pay the tuition fee for the university, it does not limit them from the college and university education, and also if they do not work for some years, it does not care for them. Because they have enough money for their life expenditures, and they do not go to the college and university for achieving to the highest level of education or for qualifying for good jobs in society. In my opinion most of them just want the college or university degree. And the second reason is that the government need money for education, health, military, food, agriculture and sanitation, and the government can use this financial support which it had got from rich people not only for the expenditures of the education of the poor people but also for another services. And last reason is that if the government take the money from rich people, the government do not let them to be equal with poor people at services, and that is not fair if the both poor and rich people use the government services equally.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Don't try to support both sides. Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1775 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.482 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.299 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.192 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.424 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...stated in the first reason they are not afford to pay tuition and also there are some ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le use the government services equally.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58987341772 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40205808247 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379746835443 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0913765891 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.083333333 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9166666667 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365207517548 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185452449337 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13327729817 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314403858112 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112323015058 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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