Dear John,
I am writing this letter to you in regards to the letter I received this morning in which you have mentioned about the noise from my flat and how it is troubling you and others in the society.
First of all, I would like to present my sincere apologies for all the trouble. I know I should have informed you prior to it but, I am sorry for not doing so.
Let me tell you in details, I and my friends are participating in the charity event which is organised by our society this weekend for the children’s hospital down the street. We were lacking the budget and so we were practising the band at my place. However, we were unaware of the fact that the rumble will disturb you and others too.
Once again, I beg your pardon and for the future, it won't repeat, as, the reverberation of the drums was the main reason for the disturbance but now on I’ll put a sound cheater on it before using to muffle the voice. Moreover, I would like to invite you to come and see the performance and give your valuable feedback. Do you mind coming?
Awaiting for your reply
Neha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ohn, I am writing this letter to you in regards to the letter I received this morning in w...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...luable feedback. Do you mind coming? Awaiting for your reply Neha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39705882353 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46538414708 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612745098039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1789401524 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301765720524 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106290031477 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752907673345 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169860570903 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816737402669 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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