Dance is the art form which is worshipped as the religion in the world.Each and every state is known by its specific dance form.For instance,Punjab for Bhangra,Rajasthan for ghoomar and many more.
In opinion,I strongly support the dominacy of contemporary dance over ancient form.As in modern era,people are more engaged as well as love to tap their feet on modern dance.While it comprises innovative and advance forms such as moon walk,fusion,salsa,hip hop ,contemporary and many more choices.In addition to it,they feel delighted and thrilling,seems lost in their own world.Besides that,for today adolescent as well as younger it act as stress buster.Moreover,modern dance can b learnt without the requirement of the choreographer .Due to which it is accessible to all status of people.
No doubt,traditional dance was sledomly practised in ancient era.They place it at zenith in their heart with complete dignity.It was usually performed in the name of goddess.Apart from that,primitive dance require heavy decorated clothes which have to be carried perfectly.On the contrary,people considered it as fun loving activity.After that modern dance include more body movement rather than bulky and overly fashioned lifestyle.As they can perform in their comfortable outfit.
In the epilogue,modern dance is soothening as well as keep the body fit whereas traditional dance form should prevail in hearts of people as to dignify our motherhood.Today growing youngsters state it as zeal and zest for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60698689956 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74327260256 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.205524729 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.0 106.682146367 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.75 7.06120827912 520% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217498850447 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125193996095 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316958958622 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125193996095 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316958958622 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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