Undoubtedly, protecting eco- system is a prime part of every citizen. Some people think that it is essential to save, while others do not take any possible action to save the nature. I am going to explain the importance of the environment and every individuals responsibility to tackle this major concern.
To begin with, as a citizen, saving environment is an integral part in their life. This is because, it provides adequate oxygen to live, and other vital benefits like food and fresh air, otherwise the existing living specious will eradicate forever from the planet. In this circumstances, the earth should be conserved from all kinds of illegal activities such as deforestation, erecting skyscrapers for residential or commercial purposes and excessive usage of superior plastics in daily life. Thus, it make it clear that without a clean and peaceful surrounding, the living planet will also vanish forever.
These leading problems can be addressed through some practical ways in my point of view. Firstly, government should awareness the people regarding the consequences of environmental destruction through social medias and other organisations in the society. It would quickly reach to the public and get an idea about eco- system and it's protection. Secondly, the public should maintain a proper and clean waste management system because the number of people, today, across the globe especially developing countries , dumbing the waste inappropriate manner which would extremely affect the earth like pollution. Thirdly, saving water is an another key element to reserve the earth from increasing climate changing. Thus, these initial measures can be deal the rising environmental impacts some extent.
In conclusion, when people save the nature, they indeed save their own life because, a sound planet is an inevitable part of human being. Unless take any quick action against destruction of the natural resources, it will adversely ruin the wonderful world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a key' or 'another key'.
Suggestion: a key; another key
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43181818182 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87633637124 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.021970839 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112734086727 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356332629577 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420970834429 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753142158864 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765912093719 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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