The given table chart reveals the proportion of satisfaction level of both genders in city sports club.
At a cursory glance, it is vividly observed, the striking factor being the trend of overall variations in the opinion about club,s activities, facilities as well as opening hours by male and female members. On the statistical analysis, it can be derived, 35% females are very satisfied in range of activities. Whereas,20% more malesare very satisfied as compared to females. Unlikely, 5% men are not satisfied to cherish range of activities.Approximately,64% both genders are very satisfied with club,s amenities. While, 65% both genders are just satisfied with club,s facilities. In the majorityof 72% women welcome the opening hours. Whereas,marginal 3% females who are not satisfied.
To sum up, Most of the females are satisfied to enjoy the openong hours. yet, males are just happy with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...all variations in the opinion about club,s activities, facilities as well as openi...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Approximately
...atisfied to cherish range of activities.Approximately,64% both genders are very satisfied wit...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...oth genders are very satisfied with club,s amenities. While, 65% both genders are ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...oth genders are just satisfied with club,s facilities. In the majorityof 72% women...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of 72% women welcome the opening hours. Whereas,marginal 3% females who are not satisfi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , marginal
...women welcome the opening hours. Whereas,marginal 3% females who are not satisfied. To...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
...e satisfied to enjoy the openong hours. yet, males are just happy with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, whereas, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34265734266 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42271796799 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6506937258 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18200640273 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666038195409 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614635596353 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119680164575 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653857507247 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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