In this era of modernization, the government plays an imperative role to improve the transportation system. As, it is very helpful for homosapiens. Man has been travelling since ancient time.
I disagree with this notion that the government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. Primarily, people have hectic schedule. They only use cars and buses to reach their destination. Hence, they can reach their places in just few minutes. Moreover, rail system requires much more price to build. Such as, the price of engines and railway tracks is very costly rather than road,s material. Furthermore, when people travel by rail. They face many problems. Sometimes, rail can not reach at platform on time. Rails have no time of starting and stopping. Thereafter, people have to wqit for another rail. Whereas, peole can reach their destinations by buses or cars. Therefore, according to my point of view, the government should spend more money to bulid roads.
On the other hand, railway produces less pollution as compared to cars or buses. Likely, railway system is the fastest mode of travelling rather than buses or cars. Yet, sometimes, rails create numerous problems. According to me, road is an essential thing for travelling in different fields of the world.
In the epilogue, the government should spend more money to build roads. So that, people can Cherish to see beautiful places which are situated in the close proximity from their homes.
- Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 56
- The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.Summarize the information. 56
- in some countries young people move into their own home in their early twenties.In other countries,young people stay with your parents until their thirties.Why is this happening?what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations 73
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 85
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...y tracks is very costly rather than road,s material. Furthermore, when people trav...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...etimes, rails create numerous problems. According to me, road is an essential thing for travell...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In the epilogue, the government should spend more money to build roads. So that...
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Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...utiful places which are situated in the close proximity from their homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16317991632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62302720228 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1622832006 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.0909090909 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8636363636 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234176046625 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666444960183 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138534518751 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124734418109 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605725467839 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.46 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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