The maps demonstrate how Stokeford village changed over the years from 1930 to 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that a lot of housing complexes were built to accommodate people, while the farmland disappeared completely.
In 1930, the village mostly contained farmland with some houses, shops, Post office and Primary school. In the right side, there was a Large house inside the gardens.
By 2010, the village witnessed considerable change. The chain of houses were added along the central road in the place of former shops and replaced farmland which had been situated beside the River Stroke causing it to vanish totally. The Primary school was extended with two blocks and the Large house was made into Retirement home. However, the Post office, the central road and the bridge remained unchanged over the eight decades.
- Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other Others believe people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 20
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuals and teams is the reason for most sport achievements. Others, however, think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003 2006 76
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 56
- The given line graph shows the past and projected figures on the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rdens. By 2010, the village witnessed considerable change. The chain of houses...
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...tirement home. However, the Post office, the central road and the bridge remaine...
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...e Post office, the central road and the bridge remained unchanged over the eight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19259259259 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37464891637 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3093901674 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180498403955 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915485638889 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139364303145 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138891178826 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158458465931 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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