Burgeonig industrial growth and globalization are two most important factors responsible for rise in number of travellers across the world. It is a coomonly held belief that uprise in the economical air travel has transformed the travel by making it more convenient,quicker and consumer friendly.However, others have an argument thatit has negative impact on the global envoirnment and natural resources. In my opinion, world has taken lowcost airfares as a positive step due to its multifold benefits.
One the oneside, low priced air tarvel has given big boosting effect to the global economy. Businesses are more swift than before. Due to more number of travellers, governments are fuelling lot of financial resources into the airports. As a result better infrastructure is availanble at airportsand better airsafety features have made this route a safer option.Calgary airport in my home town is a best example of that. Consumers are in a win-wn situation, as they get fairly priced travel with more comfort.
On the otherside, some argue that more airtravel has negatively impacted the eco-system of the Earth. For example, places like Leh-Ladakh, in Himalyan ranges are seeing a skyrocketing rise in tourists , eversince the airports are developed in these cites. Huge rush of tourist is taking upon the local eco-system. Tourists are bringing lot of money and some others are endangering the local population with ill effects of illicit drugs.As a result government hs to bring legislation to restrict the number of tourists.
However, in my opinion, above drawbacks could be easily mitigated by regulatory efforts of the local governments and educating people about the eco-tourism, before they visit to the place. Advantages do outwigh the drawbacks of ceap air travel.People have been able to explore virgin places of the world and gained benefits.
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- Some people think that the increase of cheap air travel has brought many benefits while travel others argue that this development has its drawbacks to the world’s environment and resources. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37201365188 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11197537958 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6953148266 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191164380773 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551805280152 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460740638033 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10915024225 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564317262884 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.