The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The two given maps illustrate the different in road access to a city hospital between 2007 and three years later.
It is immediately seem that the area around the city hospital had been expanded, with a noticeable change in the way people park their cars and how they could catch a bus.
Traffic tram could be solved by putting two roundabouts at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road; together with the other in front of the Hospital, linking the Hospital Road and the bus station.
The biggest transition was a bus station had been built, replaced the original bus stop, which could be more convenience. Also the car park was separated from staff and public car park into two different places. The original car park was then became the staff car park, and the public one was constructed right beside the City Hospital.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... stop, which could be more convenience. Also the car park was separated from staff a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76551724138 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42662598564 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6221007542 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154461145782 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898062210508 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964627667488 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127905147204 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975199817831 0.0580467560999 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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