I am not totally agree with statement. I agree a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract but I am agree with that he or she should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
When we talk about crime than it's important to understand all aspects of the situation in which crime happens.Sometimes person did crime to save themselves also. For example if someone intentionally disturb another at highest level than the person can do anything due to irritation. similarly in India it has been seen that female killed man to protect herself, so the girl should retain any civil rights or the benefit from her own labor.
Human has tendency to react towards others action. crime is also one of the reaction for needs (may be physical, materialistic or mental). This reactions drive behavior of an individual which can be modify. Similarly, if someone is doing crime knowingly than we can provide behavior correction therapies through psychologist rather than giving punishment by hindering civil rights.
when we stop someone from their right than he or she do same mistake again again due to their stubbornness. so we should find some other penance to absolve the crime insist of dismissing their civil rights and right to benefit from his or her own labor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83185840708 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66361391034 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8081792075 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496357164107 0.243740707755 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165904592917 0.0831039109588 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231980035594 0.0758088955206 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306912071844 0.150359130593 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188128163941 0.0667264976115 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.