Some people think tha it is neccessary to travel to another country to learn about it.other argue that information is available on Tv/internet.Discuss both views with your opinion.

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...he most effective stressbuster activity.Presently,few strata of society believe that it ...
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...ffective stressbuster activity.Presently,few strata of society believe that it is m...
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...ently,few strata of society believe that it is mandatory to commute to other nati...
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...rnet is more appropriate to obtain data.Here,i would like to account both views sith...
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... is more appropriate to obtain data.Here,i would like to account both views sith m...
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... many points to support the former view.Firstly, it is well said that what we see is wh...
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... in better way by paying personal visit.To justify,a person can get a chance to le...
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... way by paying personal visit.To justify,a person can get a chance to learn about ...
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...et a chance to learn about new languages,culture and tradition as well as they can acqui...
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... only and discard the unneccessary data.As a result,an individual can broaden thei...
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...iscard the unneccessary data.As a result,an individual can broaden their horizon of...
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...heir horizon of knowledge by travelling.Moreover,one can enhance their friend circle by ...
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...izon of knowledge by travelling.Moreover,one can enhance their friend circle by inte...
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...nteract with the people of other nation.Hence,they can upgrade thier communication sk...
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...ct with the people of other nation.Hence,they can upgrade thier communication skillse...
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...rous points to shore up the latter view.Initially,tv and internet is a lucrative source t...
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Suggestion: , tv
...ts to shore up the latter view.Initially,tv and internet is a lucrative source to a...
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...to acquire information about new places.To exemplify,one can obtain knowledge at f...
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...nformation about new places.To exemplify,one can obtain knowledge at few clicks and ...
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...aving and less exlensive method as well.Therefore,an individual can get data about new pl...
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... less exlensive method as well.Therefore,an individual can get data about new place...
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...r home and not mandatory to visit there.Apart from it,there are many special channels...
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...t mandatory to visit there.Apart from it,there are many special channels and website a...
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...e accurate facts and figure to increase ones knowledge.Hence,an individual do not ne...
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...s and figure to increase ones knowledge.Hence,an individual do not need to pay person...
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... figure to increase ones knowledge.Hence,an individual do not need to pay personal ...
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...on about other nation. From my notion,both the views have their own significane.Un...
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...th the views have their own significane.Undeniably,tv and internet is lucrative method so...
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...ws have their own significane.Undeniably,tv and internet is lucrative method sourc...
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...ably,tv and internet is lucrative method source to gain knowledge .However,i stil...
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...crative method source to gain knowledge .However,i still believes that personal v...
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...ative method source to gain knowledge .However,i still believes that personal visit ha...
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...ethod source to gain knowledge .However,i still believes that personal visit has ...
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...urce to gain knowledge .However,i still believes that personal visit has no match. To...
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...l visit has no match. To recapitulate,travelling is mind relaxing activity.Everybody can...
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...te,travelling is mind relaxing activity.Everybody can not afford to travel to other count...
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Suggestion: depended
...ther country so adoptation of method is depend on persons choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56206896552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85445832631 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.108541374 49.4020404114 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.6 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.4 7.06120827912 346% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157622212062 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933971493844 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207704191941 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933971493844 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207704191941 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.87 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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