After the industrialization, the lifestyle of people changed; especially, the younger's lifestyle has changed dramatically. In my view, nowadays young people are living more independent than in the past. They are now able to decide the manner of their life themselves, however, in the past, they were more dependent on their parents for making a decision. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, young people choose their field of study. Most of the young people have the university education and they are able to choose their field of study themselves. Consequently, they can choose their own job, but, in the past, the younger had to continue their parent's job. For example, when I choose Physics as my field of study, none of my parents did study physics. However, they let me choose independently. If I was born 100 years ago, I would never be able to choose Physics. Because at that time children were more relevant to their parents; actually, the parents made a decision for them.
Furthermore, these days, younger usually live independently after the age of 18. In the past, young people usually lived with their parents until they get married and usually, their parents chose the wife or husband for them. However, in this century, young people after finishing the high school, be separated from their parents and choose the place for living independently. Hence, they will be able to choose anything independently, especially, they will choose a partner to live.
Admittedly, today, young people have enough money. Young people usually work after finishing the school, hence, they have enough money to do anything that they want. In the past, young people usually received a little money from their parents because of the working at home or farm. Hence, the parents bought what the children need for them, hence, the children were not able to choose what they buy.
Due to the aforementioned grounds, today young people can make the decision themselves, more independently than in the past. Because they have the university education, live independently and have enough money. In my view, the children of a family are going to be more independent from their family and after a few decades, they will be separated from their family even in the early ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngers'' or 'younger's'?
Suggestion: youngers'; younger's
...tyle of people changed; especially, the youngers lifestyle has changed dramatically. In ...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om their family even in the early ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03141361257 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68210549121 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426701570681 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8544790629 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.88709677419 430% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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