The given chart illustrates the information about, The total number of hours which enjoyed a comparison between men and women including their work status. From 1998 to 1999.
Overall, It can be seen that Unemployed and Retired categories spend most free time during a week in comparison to the other three categories.
Starting with, Unemployed and retired categories of both sex enjoyed similar hours in leisure activity in a week. Which are 80 hours and 70 hours regards to male and female respectively. The favor of full time employed individuals, Male categories were relaxed for more than 40 hours during a week. Conversely, Female got slightly least time than men to relax which is 40 hours in 7 days.
Nevertheless, Between the year 1998 and 1999. Only female categories had been working part-time and they spent nearly 40 hours in a week for leisure activity. On the other hand, Housewives could afford to enjoy 70 hours of relaxation.
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... their work status. From 1998 to 1999. Overall, It can be seen that Unemployed ...
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...parison to the other three categories. Starting with, Unemployed and retired ca...
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...s during a week. Conversely, Female got slightly least time than men to relax which is 40 hour...
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...to relax which is 40 hours in 7 days. Nevertheless, Between the year 1998 and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, nevertheless, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99367088608 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71504233762 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8959897734 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322717707769 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120059992868 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052687690097 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1696897795 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073475101936 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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