Uniform is suitable for the workplace. Do you agree or disagree.
Dress of an employee at work reflects company on a major note. Therefore, the uniforms were on trend and still is a debatable issue, for, a segment supports the idea and others demur. The essay, however, supports the later. Though there are many reasons behind it, but the the essay will discuss autonomy and comfort as two pivotal reasons.
To embark, autonomy is a crucial element for each individual, may it be at their home or at the workplace. Everyone prefers to be at their own space and such people who all are being given their freedom, create wonders. To illustrate, a company in New Delhi, India, curtailed his employees to wear the identical dress, a few years back, and evidently, in a months time, there was a huge fall in the performance of the employees. This autonomy at the workplace for what they wear can affect positively at a company.
Moreover, one feels more comfortable in an Indian outfit and other in western. Certainly, the uniform system in such a mindset can never comfort everyone which eventually will affect the company badly on a long run. To support my point, research by Oxford University conducted in 2014 on ten different companies scattered around the globe stated- the performance of companies which do not provide comfort zone at the workplace is always below to the other companies. Ironically, complete comfort is also dangerous. Hence, few sets of rules with a few loopholes are always encouraged by the employees.
To recapitulate, freedom and ease at work with few ferocious policies and restrictions are always welcomed by employees and are secret of thriving companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...h there are many reasons behind it, but the the essay will discuss autonomy and comfort...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...h there are many reasons behind it, but the the essay will discuss autonomy and comfort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98161764706 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74393549219 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0508634502 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744939702012 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240719157514 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372002992931 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387826491174 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236718239418 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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