Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years.
Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter:
– Explain how much you have missed your friend
– Describe how you feel about your friend’s return
– Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I am glad to know that you are coming back to Gurgaon city, after staying in Germany for five years. I still remember the time when we used to study and play together, and in the last five years, I had missed you every time while recalling those moments.
I am feeling very happy about your arrival. You are my support system, I am very much enthusiastic to imagine that we will be together again.
As Gurgaon is a new place for you, I recommend that we should share a home. There are many reasons for this. First and foremost, the reason to rent a house together is that we share a bond of love because we know each other since childhood. Moreover, we have a very good mutual understanding and we care about each other likings and dislikings, which would make us wonderful housemates. Last but not the least, we are from the same professional background and we can be an excellent guide to each other as well. I suggest you think over my proposal.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Harman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fter staying in Germany for five years. I still remember the time when we used to...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry time while recalling those moments. I am feeling very happy about your arriva...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4702970297 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4078599279 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0614149117 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4615384615 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185995743296 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713580039633 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505725680083 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118240022012 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540682190268 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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