TPO 31
The author of the reading passage and the lecturor discuss whether the pattern of the fine lines surrounding the skeletal bones is the evidence that Sinosauropteryx had feathers. The author expresses that the lines cannot indicate the presence of feathers. However, the lecturor casts doubts on the author's opinion and refutes each of the author's theories by providing several counter-arguments.
Firstly, the author claims that the fine lines are the structures that formed after dinosaurs' death. Nonetheless, the lecturor mentions that the structures were nor decomposition substances in fossils. For the reason that the structures of the dinosaurs were well-preserved. So, they were feathers, not the fibers caused by decomposition after dinosaurs' death. Therefore, the lecturor states that the structures can be representation of the feathers because they were well-preserved.
Secondly, the author points out that the lines surrounding the skeleton are remains of frills, not feathers. Nevertheless, the lecturor declares that there is chemical difference between feather and frill. Feathers consist of a certain protein, and frills does not composed of this protein. And in the fossil, the certain protein is found in the structures. So it is obvious that the lines surrounding the skeleton can be indicator of feathers. As a result, the lecturors believes that the chemical shows the fact that the lines surrounding the skeleton are feathers.
Finally, the author suggests that the lines surrounding the structures made structures useless for flught and thermoregulation. By contrast, the lecturor states that they can be of other use. For example, the peacock uses their feathers to attract mate. Besides, the fossil reveals that the structures are colorful, which is orange and white, so the feathers are use for display. Thus, the lecturor describes that the feathers are used to display.
- TPO 31 3
- TPO 31 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 73
- Universities should require every graduation student to take public speaking courses. 70
- TPO46 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...wever, the lecturor casts doubts on the authors opinion and refutes each of the authors...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'compose'
Suggestion: compose
... a certain protein, and frills does not composed of this protein. And in the fossil, the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53424657534 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0537346893 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462328767123 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.23620309051 182% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9360352249 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0526315789 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379513271494 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126414045647 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844721358337 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223115309351 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425885513793 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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