The pie charts above depict the median ages of Yemeni and Italian citizens in 2000 and predictions in 2050.
It is well-defined from the charts that kids, teenagers and adults under 60 years old account for most of Yemen’s population both in 2000 and 2050. At the same time, Italy holds the main percentage of adults and seniors.
By 2000, under-14-year-old people comprised of exactly a half of Yemen’s population, while Italy only had one sixth of people at that age. The percentage of adults and elders who were under 60 was almost the same as under-14-year-old. Yemeni people’s the smallest part would be for seniors over 60 with a mere 3.6%. Whereas Italian adults and elders who didn’t reach 60 were 15% higher than Yemen’s, and the ratio of people over 60 made up a quarter of all.
By 2050 in Yemen, the number of people who will be over 15 tends to increase, in particular, 15-to-56-year-old and over-60-year old people will reach 57.3% and 5.7% respectively but the people in the rest ages will fall to 37%. It is forecast that the portion of Italy citizens between 15 and 59 will be the same to citizens over 60 while the rest proportion will fall significantly.
The pie charts above depict the median ages of Yemeni and Italian citizens in 2000 and predictions in 2050.
It is well-defined from the charts that kids, teenagers and adults under 60 years old account for most of Yemen’s population both in 2000 and 2050. At the same time, Italy holds the main percentage of adults and seniors.
By 2000, under-14-year-old people comprised of exactly a half of Yemen’s population, while Italy only had one sixth of people at that age. The percentage of adults and elders who were under 60 was almost the same as under-14-year-old. Yemeni people’s the smallest part would be for seniors over 60 with a mere 3.6%. Whereas Italian adults and elders who didn’t reach 60 were 15% higher than Yemen’s, and the ratio of people over 60 made up a quarter of all.
By 2050 in Yemen, the number of people who will be over 15 tends to increase, in particular, 15-to-56-year-old and over-60-year old people will reach 57.3% and 5.7% respectively but the people in the rest ages will fall to 37%. It is forecast that the portion of Italy citizens between 15 and 59 will be the same to citizens over 60 while the rest proportion will fall significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, whereas, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81642512077 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05171036052 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0171435109 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456837878118 0.215688989381 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226482474847 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235950662616 0.0843802449381 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365117236988 0.15604864568 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203081023888 0.0819641961636 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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