Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others believe that local governments should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often debated in the field of housing design that, every one who built new houses as based on local traditional style. While, some oppose and argued that, government must allow inhabitants to construct home as their own wish. However, in my opinion, structure of house must be the interest of person who live in and that must be cope up with the geographical situation of residing area.
On the one hand, similar house designs makes exterior surface became more unique which may lead to attractive and minimize discrimination in some extent. In other words, make use of same model house has equal distribution of landscape and services. Such building mitigate the difference between rich and poor. For instance, residential apartments in cities emerging amenities as because of the constructing equality. Moreover, most of the older house design probably based on the geographical criteria would inhibit many disasters like flood and earthquake prevention and so on. Recent report from Kerala inundation survive certain primitive buildings in the history.
On the other hand, opponents believe that, a dream house must be the choice of inhabitants rather than government or neighbourhoods. In brief, many people ascertain a house by the life time achievement and that must be the taste and interest of people who owned the house. People often introduce foreign designs, architects, interior and exterior for the beautification of house. In turn, old house might not have the contemporary style and changing weather condition tolerance. Furthermore, escalating houses alter the availability of landscape to built house same like previous one to the core.
To sum up, achieving some demands of older house design is beneficial for new home. Nonetheless, develop ingenious tradition and style would enhance the space and living condition of house as a whole. Thereby, in my perspective, new house should built by the novel style on owners interest and deal with the environmental condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, in brief, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31861198738 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88803286194 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.318447574 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1764705882 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418098194709 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116601680978 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683779708689 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245116544926 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688375347982 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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