The chart below shows Morocco’s income from different economic sectors in 2003 as well as its income from fishing from 1982 to 2003.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below.
The pie chart illustrates, the account of income from six various financial divisions in 2003 and together with the amount of income from fishing in Moroccos during the year of 1982 and 2003.
Overall, the main source of financial set up in given country by tourism. Likewise, the least source of economic section was agriculture in the year of 2003.
As figured in the chart, tourism department makes up Moroccos income to 26% which is two percentage higher in contrast to industry which is 24%. Moreover, the amount of income from workers remittance also had a significant sector of income which is 21% in 2003
Regarding petroleum and fishing was the another category of economic section which was considerably similar or small percentage difference such as, 14% and 13 % respectively. Furthermore, agriculture division represents, mere 2% income in Moroccow over the period given.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85986353598 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3744502763 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.23603664747 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316421798129 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137377981745 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127931406836 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187220726372 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13528766551 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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