You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
This essay summarizes the graph which shows the average number of people using car, bus or train for their daily commute in UK, this data is for the year 1970 to 2030.
Graph clearly depicts the increase in use of car as means of daily commute over the period of time. Right from 1970 till 2030, car has been at the top of the list when compared to bus and train. The use of car has almost doubled from the beginning of the graph to the end of the graph, on the other hand use of bus almost dropped by 25%. Bus is the only transport system which saw a down fall. Commuting by train being at the bottom in the year 1970 recovered itself and reached second place by 2030.
A comparison between the three transportation services show that in the year around 2015 when there was reduction in the use of bus. Around the same time people started adopting train as a service for daily commute which is a major reason we see a considerable amount of growth in its use from 2010 to 2030. Graph clearly shows there has been advancement in the the automotive industry and railways whereas buses were seen to be outdated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... car as means of daily commute over the period of time. Right from 1970 till 2030, car has bee...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...rly shows there has been advancement in the the automotive industry and railways wherea...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...rly shows there has been advancement in the the automotive industry and railways wherea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36538461538 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20986558803 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5135168146 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252017042017 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107801880841 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906576861221 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210209163981 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103734551517 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.