In many countries, plastic bags are one of the main sources of damage to the environment, and so they should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, plastic bags produce detrimental effect on nature and thereby many argued that which must be prohibit as a whole. However, in this essay agree with the statement because, plastic bags has a crucial role in environmental pollution in terms of soil, water, air and so on.
Initially, make use of plastic bags would be a main garbage in most of the cities and homes. In other words, versatile and durable use of plastic makes everyone to use tremendously. Since, such byproducts or bags may thrown into the garbage of homes, village and community. By the virtue of that, dumping excessive amount of plastic covers outside the areas which would lead to soil pollution. Moreover, this inorganic material stay prolonged years in the land and make difficulty to grow plants and mitigate the survival of soil to the core. For instance, landslid waste of Nepal reports, more than million tonnes of plastic bags and substance arise out from the deep soil.
Secondly, improper disposal of plastic waste makes up the water pollution and pother harmful effect on air and living organism. Famous environmentalist from Germany described the experience from the ocean that, million tonnes of plastic bottles and food coverings he found from the deep sea. According to him, after 2050 most of the ocean would be plastic than ocean animals. Finally, many people experienced the recycling process of this substance or deteriorate by fire lead to air pollution and health hazards too.
To sum up, plastic bags are favorable for easy use, nevertheless, pernicious effect of this bags has extremely grave. Owing to the fact that, plastic bag must be illicit to the core.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'main garbage'.
Suggestion: main garbage
...ally, make use of plastic bags would be a main garbage in most of the cities and homes. In oth...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'throw' or 'be thrown'?
Suggestion: throw; be thrown
...sly. Since, such byproducts or bags may thrown into the garbage of homes, village and ...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...dslid waste of Nepal reports, more than million tonnes of plastic bags and substance ar...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...bed the experience from the ocean that, million tonnes of plastic bottles and food cove...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...use, nevertheless, pernicious effect of this bags has extremely grave. Owing to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02517985612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59142892164 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8646560234 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174361836879 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066071365405 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482707127788 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122953001946 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468083781 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.