Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often discussed in many ways such as people lived without assistance or care of others especially in current situations. Whereas, many argued that which is a negative attitude and people never can be an independent always. However, in my perspective, being an Independant is dangerous neither in new generation world nor ancestral time because, every day life people were connected each other by physically or mentally.
On the one hand, industrialization makes life faster and stronger which make impact on behaviour of people and thereby many explained that everybody can live independently. Earlier, people are regularly contacted to their near and dear ones perhaps, they lived together. Conversely, modernization develops societies living status in different stages and people become more isolated themselves and inclined to their own lives rather care of others. For instance, nowadays, everybody have cell phones to call or send instead of sending information by person. Similarly, young generation are inclined to their own mobile world and think without support of elders or dear ones they can live at any cost.
On the other hand, mutual caring and sharing things would lead to intimacy and interpersonal relationship to each other which we could not get by technology such as, medical care, love and affection and so on. Whether it is modern world or prime time such basic physiological needs must be essential for everyone. Lack of joint family, distant education and jobs may have the consequence of novel world that would be reduce by the proper care affection by the parents or care giver. For example, students from boarding school emphasize that problem associated with lack of support from the parents who works in foreign country as part of job would affect their overall well being to the core.
To conclude, modernization open the door of living status, nonetheless, people could not live complete independence in somehow everyone would co relate or co operate with each other even in modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and people never can be an independent always. However, in my perspective, being an I...
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... in my perspective, being an Independant is dangerous neither in new generation w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24233128834 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79857000149 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0112692686 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230375172495 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772249798341 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483384388668 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134501696153 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298564355242 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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