Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary time, there have been a wide-range of people who works under flexible environment for their life satisfaction, while some of the works, which would be dirty and very hard, is employed by a people, who is chasing the money. In terms of labor satisfaction, I completely agree with the statement, and I will give my opinion and there will be a logical conclusion.
Firstly, it is clear that big amount of salary is the one of the fundamental need, engaged in a job gratification. However, in order to make enjoyment from their concern, people should not make a money because it have scientifically proven that money can’t buy happiness and it’s more pleasant to pursue what you’re interested in. For example, my brother works in small bank as teller and he do not make a much money. Albeit, he can feed their family as wage and even he have a quite deposit in bank, leading him onto pleasure.
Secondly, gratification is more crucial than money because Job satisfaction gives you a sense of fulfillment. By this way, people would attract their effort, and they would even promote in their work. In instance, my brother, as I have mentioned before, he is working hardly like a bull because of convenient atmosphere. In this occurrence, he can advance a position, helping to extract cash.
In conclusion, however money is a one of the basic desires, Job satisfaction is more crucial because money will always shadow a people who motivated by fulfilment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ment for their life satisfaction, while some of the works, which would be dirty and very ha...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ople should not make a money because it have scientifically proven that money can&ap...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...er works in small bank as teller and he do not make a much money. Albeit, he can f...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'much money'.
Suggestion: much money
...small bank as teller and he do not make a much money. Albeit, he can feed their family as wa...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...small bank as teller and he do not make a much money. Albeit, he can feed their family...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n feed their family as wage and even he have a quite deposit in bank, leading him on...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('deposit') instead of another adjective.
...d their family as wage and even he have a quite deposit in bank, leading him onto pleasure. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a position, helping to extract cash. In conclusion, however money is a one of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93650793651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92799065089 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9614187243 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155497674469 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593212396331 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623598917033 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843325277937 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229863232448 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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