In today's age of information breakthrough, knowledge seems to be the key to each individual' success. Apart from the advantages main sets of skills that are taght in the current global, some people believe that they also need to improve soft skill. I would argue that it is better not to neglect other.
To begin with, there are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to help people to be lived stable life. One justification is that the pace of lifeis increasingly fast. The competitive in today's world makes it extremely challenging for people, so everyone needs to learn and to improve their skills. Learning these skills will help you find new ways of thinking and problem solving. You can stay ahead of change and make the most of all that opportunity. For example, when you start to apply for a job, most companies need you to get these abilities such as leadship, communication, time management and so on. They advance a situation and ask you to look elsewhere for many ways. You must expose one's own strength and weakness as well as opportunity and show experiences you have achieved good results.
Despite the above arguments, it seems to me that people should also pay attention to other risks in the mordern world. I believe that sofl skills support would be more useful for oneself. Firstly, you can expand the relationship and knowledge, base on communication skill. Lost in foreign countries, you must face to face with problems. As a result, soft skills are really necessary. Secondly, it gives people to increase brainstorm and helps you learn to speed. When you approach the problem from different angle, you will deal with the situations simpler and soft skills are therefore one of the key requirement in our life.
In conclusion, while I argue that people can benefit from learning skills, I believe that skills also be an important part of life.
- Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development? 56
- Nowadays scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges What are the advantages and disavantages of this development 89
- Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...bal, some people believe that they also needs to improve soft skill. I would argue th...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...heir skills. Learning these skills will help you to find new ways of thinking and problem solvin...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to speed'
Suggestion: to speed
...increase brainstorm and helps you learn speed. When you approach the problem from dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8722741433 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67451243413 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3908919845 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3157894737 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160951432462 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507265443407 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558095267984 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116241559346 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458665818062 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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