Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Art can be correlated with the freedom of expression of people of different ages, caste, creed, color, race, culture and religion. Most people think it as a waste of time for their children being taught at the school level and many are strong advocate because they find art beneficial for their young ones. I will discuss both views in this essay.
Children with naive minds are often expressive and they endeavor to communicate with others either through their language or by using any physical means. The reflection of soul of any artist is determined by their work produced. In the school level, where there is immense study and peer pressure, there should be spare time for children in which they would be allowed to discover their inner capability and creativity in the field of art. It could be either painting, music, sculpture formation, dancing and many more. This should be accompanied by the assistance of their teachers and parents and if any child deserves the right to be promoted according to his/her skills, he/she should be encouraged to pursue career in this field. We live in a society where we are focused to be strong in academics, therefore we have to undermine our potential in art even we deserve to accomplish popularity by adopting it. Students usually not good in academics possess the apt in creativity, art and exploring new ideas and giving a body to their imagination, so they must be given opportunity to give their precious time to art.
In contradiction to the above opinion, all children are not the same and many though are not expressive at all. Interest in art plays a major role in being involved in it and if any child would not be able to grasp the ability of art due to shyness or any other reason, then it should not be imposed him/her to do so. This would make people think about it as a complete waste of time.
I would rather recommend to make art a compulsory subject for those children at school level who would preferably be interested in this field and pursue career in the future and the rest could opt for any other subject in the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for any other subject in the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68918918919 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51483400362 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4415236646 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236688231614 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899293574357 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824649133182 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183467611284 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642805420922 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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