In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
In today's world people are relocating from towns and villages to cities for better opportunities and better life. This has caused an exponential growth in city population. High population has raised the demand of accommodation which in turn is causing the expansion of the city.
Every major cities in world has expanded approximately twice the actual size in last decade. Space crunches in city is now a major issue as nearby farmlands are now getting converted into residential area. From the historic time, the cities were developed majorly in river banks or near water sources, current expansion of cities are causing water scarce. Besides infrastructure issues there is a major issue of destruction of forests near cities. Countryside were always known for their beautiful vicinity filled with trees, parks and open spaces. building high rises in countryside is not only occupying the free space but also turning it into a cement city with no trees, parks or open space.
If deforestation is the only issue we are facing while converting the countryside to city? No, we are also hampering the natural habitat of many animals. There are many animals and birds which are on edge of extinction. Sparrow is one of those birds which are affected by it. In the city I live in, there is a drastic drop in sparrow count. One of the research mentioned that there are more than ten species getting affected by expansion of cities.
I believe it is important to understand the priority to protect countryside. It is important to plan the city layout properly without hampering vicinity. If the necessary actions are not taken immediately then the future generation will never know the existence of beautiful countryside.
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- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 61
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- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Building
...lled with trees, parks and open spaces. building high rises in countryside is not only o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7653379234 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4953970725 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117807514343 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376154934723 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462328613915 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694808413325 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223541526197 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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