universities should accept equal number of male and female studdent in every subject.
to what extent do you agree or disagree.
in recent days, lots of talent is present in both men and woman. so, this is necessary to educational institute must take admissions equally for opposite-sex in each field of studies. In my opinion, i agree that women also huge potential to prove themselves similar to men. However, they are also possess with excellent managerial skills. Below paragraphs will support my idea.
Primarily, the best way to teach a nation is to literate their mothers. The first lesson children learn, this is basically of his/her mother.if we educate and create chances for women in each aspect of education then we can develop a remarkable generation. To illustrate this, there are number of famous females who spent their lives for nations. such as, Mother Teresa who is well known by her charitable work and honored with numerous awards like Nobel Peace Prize, Order of the Smile and golden Honor of Nation. We have also an example of Florence Night angle who was nurse and served her entire life in saving people lives. This shows that females have a great impact in our nation building.
Furthermore, woman also gifted with tremendous managerial skill through which the specifically organized some chores quickly and in a best way. For instance, in Arts and Designing, we have numerous well known name of females rather than males where they have a great influence. such as Dane Vivenne Westwood who is known by her modern punk and new wave fashion as a CEO of company and Nan Golden who is a Photographer best-known for featuring of different creative themes. this all happens only due to similar opportunities in education system.
To sum up the above point of views, i conclude that females also have unique characteristics, which we can use in any sections of life in order to get advancement and development of country and this is possible only through equality in education system for women.
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 11
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 61
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 11
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 11
- universities should accept equal number of male and female studdent in every subject.to what extent do you agree or disagree. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...alent is present in both men and woman. so, this is necessary to educational insti...
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...n each field of studies. In my opinion, i agree that women also huge potential to...
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...ality in education system for women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95297805643 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66404567821 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8161529152 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533115430009 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184900117358 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256915016152 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351395997156 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00645934304792 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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