The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University:
A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors.
Faculty committee of Seatown University claimed that as per the study at nearby Oceania University , faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at their university for their own college-aged children. Hence the committee has requested to the president of Seatown University to incorporate the same in which will enhance morale among the faculty and will also enthrall new professor. Before taking decision regarding the same , the president should consider other aspects also ,like merit of the student, whether it should be full or partial waive off and any negative impression on the other students , budget of the university etc.
Students are the core part of any educational institution and they come from various parts of the society. University's reputation solely dependent on students result or we may say student's merit. Before providing a chance to be admitted to the university , student's merit should have been verified. There are various method for individual university. Same should be conducted for faculty's children also. It is not always true that faculty's student will have enough merit to be admitted to the Seatown University. If they get advantages for being faculty's student , it may leave negative impression on other students.
Furthermore , academically weak students will not be able to score as high as other students and consequently it would affect the university's reputation. Also , job placement statistics would be hampered for these students.
Before deciding the free tution for faculty's children , university also should check their budget. On the basis of that they may provide some types of scholarships , full or partial based on the performance of the student.
Overall , before providing admission to the faculty's children , university should test their merit and after that only university may provide some kind of scholarship on the basis of their performance in the merit test. By this university will get academically good students and professor also can have opportunity to ave tuition fee waiver for their children.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1730 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.34 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.344 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r the study at nearby Oceania University , faculty retention is higher when profes...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ty for their own college-aged children. Hence the committee has requested to the pres...
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...efore taking decision regarding the same , the president should consider other asp...
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...ident should consider other aspects also ,like merit of the student, whether it sh...
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...egative impression on the other students , budget of the university etc. Studen...
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... chance to be admitted to the university , students merit should have been verifie...
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Suggestion: as well
...ould be conducted for facultys children also. It is not always true that facultys st...
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...ays true that facultys student will have enough merit to be admitted to the Seato...
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...et advantages for being facultys student , it may leave negative impression on oth...
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...ssion on other students. Furthermore , academically weak students will not be ...
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... affect the universitys reputation. Also , job placement statistics would be hampe...
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...ng the free tution for facultys children , university also should check their budg...
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...y may provide some types of scholarships , full or partial based on the performanc...
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...e performance of the student. Overall , before providing admission to the facul...
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...iding admission to the facultys children , university should test their merit and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 324.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45987654321 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86598878842 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1256276394 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310345104657 0.218282227539 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113104325793 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131915704906 0.0701772020484 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176662419929 0.128457276422 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131572573543 0.0628817314937 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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