A magazine published an article about your country. However there are some mistakes/wrong information in that article. Write a letter to the editor:
- Explain that the article contains wrong information.
- Supply the correct information instead.
- Provide some more interesting information for the editor to publish in the future.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing about your article which was published in the X magazine last week and described the country of Iran. Thanks in advance for publishing such a beautiful article but unfortunately the article contains some wrong information.
First of all, you mentioned that the climate of the country is hot and dry, however we have climate change in our country. You can see hot, dry summers and cold, dry winters, besides you can enjoy fresh weather in early spring and autumn. Secondly, in the article you discussed there are just a few cities to visit such as Isfahan and Shi...
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Sentence: For example there are beautiful islands in my country such as Kish and Gheshm that realy worth a visit.
Error: realy Suggestion: really
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