In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?

Submitted by Satrajit on Wed, 08/29/2018 - 01:34

Nowadays, more attraction is shifted to super stores or huge shopping centers instead of small local shops. There are several reasons behind it, but the question arise if this transformation is really helping society to grow? I would like to discuss them in below part of my essay.

In order to understand the plus and the minus of above issue, let us first dig into the cause of the problem. Small shops always have limited variety of products due to budget and space constraint. Customer who are looking for the choices will get only few items to compare with. Whereas on other hand, large shopping centers and malls usually contains spacious shops with wide range of products. Moreover, the other benefit is that you can find multiple shops at one place. For instance, you can find cloth market and shoe market in a same mall.

Above benefits leads buyer to go to malls but in my opinion this has a lot of consequences on local shop owners. Despite of having good quality and unique products available, they are not able to make good profit. Even some shop owners are struggling for survival due to reduced sell. This leaves a negative impact on families of such shop owners. With this change, rich are becoming richer and poor small shop owners are becoming more poor.

As we know, change is the only constant in today's world. To grow in future people need to adapt the changes in society and mold themselves accordingly.This will help in reduction of negative impact caused by the change of era.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, whereas, even so, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74144486692 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37194101521 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4646161927 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26879836022 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780539475406 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699323383032 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136882399867 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768570127893 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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