In this sophisticated world,it is indispensable for the use of cashless transaction amid the masses.Even though there are multifarious options to pay,credit cards are playing important role while purchasing.However,there are certain pros and cons when we are using credit cards which is summarised below.
On the one hand,firstly,certain banks provide offers for credit card users to snatch their main balance,owing to this reason,people are endeavoring for deposit money recurrence to retain their margin level which is made as stumble especially on month end.secondly,Overlooking,if people forget to pay their monthly installment,they would be punished by introducing another interest method which will cause to depression and also unrest.Thirdly,hackers are being a daunting issue who can easily operate our card without our knowledge and our heedless mistakes.For instance, in today newspaper claimed that 30 percent of credit cards are hacked by hackers by peoples careless mistakes like sharing password or purchase from unauthorized stalls.
On the other hand,credit cards are provide enormous privileges who are utilizing this properly.First of all,people can buy their desired stuffs using this method without a worry of money,because they are going to pay through monthly installment which is easy to middle class people and they can catalog their budget well earlier.People do not need to biased on others hand for their sudden requirement.In addition to that,people will get some seductive offers which will diminish the prize rate at a massive proportionate.The number of credit card users rate have elated due to the ease access and alluring offers from bank,increasing number of website is being a credential to the advantage of credit cards.
To conclude this,even though it has some problems,we can not deny the benefits from credit cards.If someone want to use credit cards,they should know about the crimes and drawbacks before commence to use will deter losses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64517794109 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.122285507 49.4020404114 472% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 423.25 106.682146367 397% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.0 20.7667163134 361% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.5 7.06120827912 531% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230473721672 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156859866552 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460557427465 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156859866552 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460557427465 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.6 13.0946893788 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.62 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.3 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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